WALT: Write a recount
Personal Goal: use big words
Ideas
Holiday
What you did in the weekend
non-fiction/ fiction
What you have done at NBC
Things to remember
Structure: title, orientation, sequence of events, concluding statement
Punctuation & paragraphs
Describe characters & places
Use metaphors, illerations, similes,
Begin here…
In the holidays I went to nelson.
The long car ride felt like one million years but the beautiful scenery is exquisite
I stayed at the Ivy farm Air B&B which my nanny runs
She owns a 2 acre piece of land but she needs help to get her air B&B up and running she says that in two years she could get it all finished
so I helped her make some veggie gardens and a chicken run I also helped her flatmate bill With making paths
And planting in the veggie gardens
Hi Saskia, I like your blog post because at the start it was very descriptive. Next time use more punction such as fullstops, comas and exclamition marks. Also double check your writing making sure the capital letters are where they are meant to be. Also maybe a little more information like, How long did you go for? Was it just you? Was there any animals at the farm? What else did you do there?. Good job Saskia!
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